Story writing 2
Today, you're going to write the section about chasing the animal, discovering the hole and climbing down the tree to discover the beautiful lake. The children row across the lake and glimpse the Victorian children. They realise that they have travelled back in time.
YOU DO NOT NEED TO INCLUDE THE BOY THIEF OR POLICEMAN. CONCENTATE ON DESCRIBING THE BEAUTIFUL LAKE AND HOW THE CLOTHING IS DIFFERENT.
It's all about using noun phrases today!
Here's a starting phrase as an example:
By 9 o'clock the next morning, Peter and Violet were back on the mound ready to search for where Benji had come from. Peter had his flash light set on his iphone, ready to search under the bushes and Stella had brought her skipping rope incase they had to help each other.